Thursday, 18 February 2016
Reflection on Place and People
I have enjoyed this third OCA photography course. What drew me to 'People and Place' was the opportunity to explore people and places, space, buildings and activity from the photographer's perspective. And I was certainly not disappointed.
I feel that I have learnt more about myself as a photographer. Over the course, I've had to challenge my wariness of photographing people that I did not know whether in the street or more formally such as for my last assignment. This wariness came from a concern that my technical skills would not deliver but also from a previous aggressive response to taking street images locally.
Initial research into how others tackled street photography and practice, looking at the work and watching videos of famous street photographers talk about their practice has moved me on here and I feel more in control and comfortable. I've been able to practise creating a rapport with subjects with positive results and this has increased my confidence.
Research has played a really strong, valuable part in my work both in carrying out exercises but also in thinking about, planning and carrying out assignments. And it will continue to do so being both invaluable to developing my ideas and 'voice' and extremely enjoyable (whether in book form, online or out and about looking at exhibitions).
I also feel that I am getting better at working to deadlines and in selecting and editing images and interestingly have found myself taking far more notes as I read, research or view the work of others than on previous courses.
So I think it fair to say that this course has taught me a great deal. It has opened my eyes as to how approach a project to deliver a 'story' within the discipline of a set timescale and how to approach the people within the project.I have been able to use my interpersonal skills, build on and develop technical skills and develop more confidence in tackling subjects featuring people in a variety of places and activities. And it has whetted my appetite for more!
Assignment 5 - response to tutor feedback (a second look).
A second look ... the client's presentation
I've had another look at how my images might be presented to the client following my tutor's feedback:
CLIENT: HOT WALLS DEVELOPMENT PROJECT
P1015 also provides a clean background to accommodate text / logo etc.
I've had another look at how my images might be presented to the client following my tutor's feedback:
'You
have a number of strong images here and they are all a celebration of the
space. I would though suggest you return to your brief and think about the
message you want to convey. The detail of the areas, which show the trace of
artistic practice, work really well. When you have too many images of the
artists themselves it does lend itself to being more of a feature piece about
them. A good way to bring this around would be to describe them as ‘case
studies’ of the use of spaces similar to the one being proposed. That would
make them really valid and useful.'
'Consider
also how this would be presented. You have included some captions but
maybe some more words would make this really work. You seem to have done such
a lot of research and have an understanding of the development this would seem a
natural progression! '
maybe some more words would make this really work. You seem to have done such
a lot of research and have an understanding of the development this would seem a
natural progression! '
So I have reworked my notes for the tutor accompanying the images into notes for the clients:
HOT WALLS PHOTOGRAPHIC IMAGES
CLIENT: HOT WALLS DEVELOPMENT PROJECT
Introduction
Hot
Walls is a development project to transform largely–disused arches in the
Hot Walls area of Old Portsmouth. The Hot Walls, as the arches are known,
were used as artillery barracks and soldiers quarters in the 1850s. The site
has a real sense of place and communal heritage and good potential for
redefining the area as a public space and cultural destination.
The
proposal to convert the Hot Walls arches into active use i.e. studios and a
‘brasserie’ type offer has not been met with favour by some local
residents who have vehemently argued the need to respect the history of the
structure. In taking images for this assignment, I have been mindful of this
local response and the images selected reflect the essence of the client’s
brief.
Client’s brief
A
selection of twelve colour photographic images to:
- capture the historic distinctiveness of the Hot Walls area of Old Portsmouth
- help achieve a better understanding amongst the local community of what the projected transformation could achieve for the area, its residents and visitors
- provide an insight of what the space can offer those working in the creative industries that are looking locally for usable and affordable space to rent.
All the photographs are suitable for print and
online use (website,
online blog etc.). The selection is based on the fact that the pictures
needed to tell a story to support minimum text which will be describing the
'offer' not what the picture is necessarily conveying.
These images are, in a sense, ‘case studies’ of the use of spaces
similar to the Hot Walls proposal. They show a sense of place and demonstrate range
of creative activities and businesses that could be sensitively accommodated
within an arch environment.
A Sense of Place…
This image
of the Hot Walls arches captures the historic distinctiveness of the
area
establishing a good sense of place for
the development’s visual
promotion.
It shows the actual
arches to be developed; the open aspect of the
frontage and the nearby historic
Round Tower in the background. The statue
of immigrants in the forefront is a
reference to Portsmouth’s past.
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P1015 also provides a clean background to accommodate text / logo etc.
And Purpose…
Reinforcing
the development proposal of studio space for artists, P1022 and P1028 can be
enlarged to provide a dominant theme setting image. Both images feature
Jeremy Glaize , an artist at work in ‘The Arches’, Southampton.
P1022
echoes the concept of creating new studios. It also offers some clear space
for text within the area of the canvas.
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| P1022 |
Creative activity
This project is
about providing much needed local and affordable studio space. These images
of young artists, Agata Wojcieszkiewicz and Jeremy Glaize at work in small
creative spaces can be used both to represent and target the potential local
market for the Hot Walls studios.
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| P1017 Agata Wojcieszkiewicz |
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| P1019 |
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| P1023 Jeremy Glaize |
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